Today I was editing and then Liv asked to watch it so Mr Amato and Mrs Brookes also watched. They gave us some feedback on what we had so far:
-Pace is key, needs more quick cuts as it such a face paced song
-The difference between the quality of the shots is visible
-The lip syncing needs to be more in time
-It needs to show more shots of us alone, showing our personalities- e.g when we are in front of the light wall pushing the guy away
-Not all the shots have to be singing, they can be just you 3 hanging out to set the scene and introduce your personalities
-When you have such good, strong footage (the nightclub scene) the rest needs to live up to that.
